Welcome to my learning portfolio. I go to Burnham School - Te Kura o Tiori. This portfolio shows some of the work I am most proud of. Please join me and give me some positive feedback.
Thursday, 10 May 2012
Castle
I was walking throagh a forest when there was a large castle. There was a large wooden door it felt like metal and steal. The wooden door had slime all over the doorknob the door had skeletons hanging from the door there was slime on the skeleton. I saw eyes sticking out the window and the eyes were looking at me I was frightend. I tried to run away but something grabbed me. Then I saw slimy windows there were cobwebs on the drawbrige it was all slimy and slippery. The swamp was all gooey. There were crockadiles and sharks in the swamp the chimney had purple and pinkish smock coming out of the end. The smock smelt like rotten egg. The flag had slime on it. it was gross so I ran away. I felt a little gross myself.
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