On Friday after school when I got home mum did my hair in a french plait on the side and at the back it had curls.
After I got dressed I headed off to the junior disco at the school in the hall. It was freezing outside I was shivering for a while. I was quite tired because was past my bedtime.
When I got to the hall I saw colourful ribbons and balloons hanging from the roof. After a while all the juniors were dancing and eating. The music was booming out loud that it hurt my ears. There were lots lolly mixes and a sausage sizzles.
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